I wrote a few days ago about vampire weaknesses and trying to find a balance for my vampires while still remaining true to their creature type. It wasn’t terribly difficult to come up with weaknesses, the difficulty came when I tried to apply only a few of them to my vampires. Weakness in moderation. If they’re too weak, after all, they’re useless. Trying to strike a balance with vampire power was far more difficult. It’s easy to get carried away and make uber-vamps that can obliterate anything in their way. This is not what I was going for, I’m going for monster-lite, tortured-lite, humanesque. Yes, they’re monsters, but I think the ability to defy age is a pretty awesome power all by itself.
But, simply the ability to live and live isn’t enough for fiction. Vampires have to be super human and mine are no exception. They have powers, I spent days researching and thinking and making notes. I made sure my vamps had powers. My biggest challenge was deciding how the powers would be divided, how did some have certain powers and others others. Once I got that solved, I had to decide what abilities my main character had, what could I give her to make sure she’s not immortal, even though she’s ever living. No one wants a protagonist that can’t suffer a little, that can’t fail. A brick house isn’t interesting to read about.
Strike a balance, that’s what I did. I think I have it worked out, now I just have to make sure I can work it all in. After all, powers are useless if you can’t use them, right? Right. I also have to work to make sure my character isn’t too human, which is something I consciously work at because to me, she always feels a little too human to be a vampire. I’m working on it but it’s not easy. Then again, anything short of ripping out the throat of enemies and eating it will feel a bit too human for me, I’m desensitized.
Then there’s the considerations about how far the character is willing to go with her abilities. Can she kill? Will she if she can? Well, yes, she is a vampire after all. All vampires seem to be able to whoop ass, though I question that, to be honest. Not every human knows how to use a gun, so why should every vampire be able to skillfully execute kung fu or whatever? Not very realistic is it? I mean, a vampire probably has the cold compulsion to kill, they are predators, but that doesn’t mean they’re automatically possessed of the ability, does it? So yeah, there are a lot of considerations. My book will probably have a few vamps who can’t fight, they can feed, but that’s hardly the same thing.
In the end it comes down to the ability to what needs to be done to carry out the plot. Characters have to be given the tools to proceed without being too powerful and overthrowing the plot. It’s certainly a balancing act but not impossible by any means. Make your characters able, my vamps certainly are!
Kristyn
I spent several days just preparing to write. New writing projects are a complete clean slate, so for me, prep is always a must. This book/series, however, required more preparation and thought than usual. Why? Because I had to decide how my vamps would work. Every fiction writer that writes anything supernatural goes through this. What sorts of abilities will my monsters have? In my case, vamps are difficult because they’re very done. Lots of writers write vamps so it’s particularly important to be original without veering too far away from what makes a vampire a vampire. Which got me thinking… with the changing characteristics and multitude of different vampire archetypes out there these days, what makes a vampire a vampire anymore? Particularly, what weaknesses should a vampire have that hearkens back to their vampire roots?
